Thursday, June 28, 2007

Star

To touch a falling star, shrieking havoc
As it plunges through a fragile atmosphere
-keening, blazing, incandescently running amok,
Until, rending protesting oxygen, it falls clear-
Is suicide. Madness! Creates one helluva shock
It screams up your arm, your brain, fear
Fully yelling,"Duck you idiot! Duck!"

You dont, of course. It would be sheer
Stupidity on my part to think of you as wise
Woman you never care to look out
for yourself. It's become a game
Charades. Russian roulette cannot exercise
As much attraction as this, there's no doubt.
It's become your one way ticket to fame.

4 comments:

Anonymous said...

Namrata,

Beautiful:)

Loved the ensuing lines:

"To touch a falling star, shrieking havoc
As it plunges through a fragile atmosphere
-keening, blazing, incandescently running amok,
Until, rending protesting oxygen, it falls clear-
Is suicide."

To share a common fact, a "falling star" has always been one of my favourite metaphors!

Keep at it.

Ms. Lane said...

Star.. me love them! :) very well written and i particularly enjoyed Duck you idiot duck!! hehe

Anonymous said...

Ooo nice... Loved your use of phrases like "helluva shock" and... yes, "duck you idiot duck!" I am liking :)

Am looking forward to more sonnets if you're planning to write them. ;)

Da Rodent said...

Hmm... now who is this about? :-S