Sunday, December 03, 2006

Meeting

Shuttered light spills gold
Banked-afterglow spins web-light
Lovers greet the night.

8 comments:

antickpix said...

feels..fragile. or..made me feel that way. take your pick

a classic case of quality over quantity, as it took 3 and a bit months to come up with that?

i'd try to be more flowery, but...ah well..

nudge nudge hint hint...story.

Namrata said...

It didnt take 3months to come up with it. I wrote it ages back. Just took 3 and some months to post it. but thank you all the same.

antickpix said...

figured.

Anonymous said...

ah... a haiku, eh? well worth the wait! really lovely.

Ms. Lane said...

nice.. i don know wat else to say..

Anonymous said...

i don't get poetry. but that..well, felt nice.
ashika here by the way. remember me?

Anonymous said...

Flashes and stabs... the two things your poetry reminds me of! Godspeed!

Krishna Kumar. S said...

we're into hi-koo's now? well well... there continues the Legend of Damini! Arranged Verse Killer!