Monday, November 22, 2010

Reminders

He wasn't you.

No.
Definitely not.

Flashes though,
a turn of phrase,
an expression,
that half admiring half quizzical
not quite sure glance.

He wasn't you.

No. Absolutely not.

3 comments:

Anonymous said...

Completely gorgeous. So tight, and neat and bitter. I think your writing just gets better and better, love.

Namrata said...

Thank you so much :) one hopes that age brings a much needed economy. More and more,I feel, being economical makes it so much more powerful. The said and the unsaid..

Anonymous said...

cryptic - the Namrata of old :D And yes as you have pointed to in your orevious comment: "economy of expression!" I can't do it if my life depended on it. lol