Dude...elucidate

That's it. I have had it upto here with being told what to write and what not to write.This is my statement against all those classes we had on how to structure an essay.Proceed at owner's peril.

Name: namrata kartik
Location: chennai, Tamil Nadu, India

Wednesday, August 20, 2008

Tell me something my love,
Did you see the dew today?

lasted all morning in the leaves
of the bottle brush,

Nah, thought you wouldn't have.
You don't look
at all.

Did you see me smile at the dog,
the one outside your window,
white with splotched eyes
rabid, diseased?

no you wouldn't have.
You don't seem mad.
not one bit.

7 Comments:

Blogger Jan said...

...aand she's back! :D

Lovely... Really...

11:52 PM  
Blogger gitler said...

haha..yep High time I started again. Its good to be back. The inspiration and the drive are back again :)

12:27 AM  
Blogger SirGit said...

Dude! Update git blog... Or else! >:[

11:27 PM  
Blogger Poshgit said...

hold it a minute while i get the red carpet rolling....

ah...welcome back!!!! :)

6:13 AM  
Blogger None said...

whoa. funny.

6:42 PM  
Blogger Writing for Crows said...

Argh, just realized I was logged in with the wrong ID.

:D

6:44 PM  
Blogger gitler said...

much thanks Crow/None.. whichever identity you are comfy with :)

Do I be knowing you by any chance?

7:32 PM  

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