Thursday, March 27, 2008

Breaking

The darkness creeps in
mist-silent, light-sharp.

Doors groan under its
unrelenting weight
bar bent iron
drumming slow tattoos of sorrow.

The jungle rushes in
Crushed velvet swathes
glinting in the black-bluing heaviness
Silent tide
rip
tide

over.

2 comments:

Anonymous said...

You don't update often enough! This is lovely ...

Anonymous said...

Hi ,

I was reading ur blog posts and found some of them to be wow.. u write well.. Why don't you popularize it more.. ur posts on ur blog took my particular attention as some of them are interesting topics of mine too;

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This way you can reach out to rambhai readers some of whom could become your ardent fans.. who knows.. :)

Cheers,